Eye Contest

Hey, it's Lizzie. I would just like to say that I am posting a new contest, an "I" contest. It can be based on two things: something with the word "I" in every sentence or something about an actual "eye". This is one of my favorite things to do. Hope you have fun!!! BYE!!!

To All Bella-N-Friends Fans . . .

Most of you might read my friend, Bella's website, http://bella-n-friends.blogspot.com . You might know that I write the Newspaper for her. I'm not sure if I want to write anymore because I think it might be a waste of time. If NO ONE is reading my Web Site, and NO ONE is reading her website, then we might as well close down both of them. So, PLEASE, write to my email (well, my shared email) to tell me if you like my site or not! Thanks, everyone!

Hey, everybody! Here's some Writing For Ya!

Hey, everyone. It's Lizzie. I was just saying HI and sorry. Um, as you all may know, school has started so it is very chaotic in my house. I have 6/7 classes with Bella and all of my classes with Cookie! I am doing very well in school. My Language Arts class (my FAVORITE) is first hour, so I love my schedule! It feels good to start the day with writing!

It has also been very stormy. A tropical storm passed my area so I could not really write then. My mom said that it isn't safe to get on the computer during a storm. 

Here is some of the short story I was writing. About Analie. Do you remember?

The tapping on her shoulder resumed. What is that? she thought curiously and cautiously to herself. She was afraid her intruder could hear her thoughts.

Look at this ^ Notice that I used the words curiously and cautiously. This is called Alliteration. Many writers use it to add some pizazz in their own writing. 

She was afraid her intruder could hear her thoughts. Notice that I added a feeling. It is good to add the character's feelings so you feel as if you were with them.

I'll write more later. Or should I say, YOU"LL write more later. Send me 3-5 paragraphs to add on to this story with your parent's permission and I may publish it ONLINE! Hurry! Send it to l8tg8r@msn.com, OK? BYE!

I am SOOOO SORRRYY!

I am very sorry. I have been hanging out with Cookie so much that I haven't got any time to write!!!!

I will post some more writing tips tomorrow. I am very tired.

BYE!